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James L’Etoile, Claire Booth, and Elena Taylor – All Together (WOW!)

   

Saturday, 11/1/2025, I had the pleasure to join a friendly group of writers and readers listen to an outstanding three-person panel moderated by Elena Taylor. Elena was joined by local authors Claire Booth and James L’Etoile. The event was hosted by the folks at WILD SISTERS BOOK COMPANY of Sacramento.

One of the questions from the audience was the author’s writing process. Plotter or Panser. This led to a lively discussion. I believe the outcome was that Jim was right and Claire was right. Both put forth valid points in the debate.

ELENA HARTWELL – Writes Crime Across Multiple Genres

Elena Hartwell also writes under Elena Taylor. When she’s not penning funny private eyes, serious police procedurals, or spooky suspense, she can be found working one-on-one as a developmental editor with writers in a variety of genres. When she’s not writing or editing, expect to see her outside with her dogs and equines at Paradise, the property she owns with her hubby, just south of Spokane. Inside, she loves to read with a cat or two on her lap (or dogs and cats all together). To learn more about Elena, you can find her at www.ElenaTaylorAuthor.com. If you’re interested in working with her as an editor, visit www.AllegoryEditing.com or find her on social media.

The Haunting of Emily Grace launching November 4.

A grieving woman takes a job at an isolated mansion only to become wrapped up in the curse that seems to have befallen its eccentric owner. With vibes of Rebecca by Daphne du Maurier, fans of Riley Sager will love The Haunting of Emily Grace!

 

 

Writing Crime Fiction from Funny PI to Police Procedural to Suspense

 My first series, the Eddie Shoes Mysteries, are funny private eye books in the vein of Janet Evanovich. I like to say that if James Rockford and Kinsey Millhone had a love child, it would be my PI, Eddie Shoes.

Eddie Shoes teams up with her mother, Chava, to solve homicides in Bellingham, Washington. Or, I should say, Chava teams up with Eddie, who has very mixed feelings about working with her mother—a woman who got kicked out of Vegas for card-counting and has a tendency to bend the rules of law that Eddie likes to follow.

Writing that series was a lot of fun. The quirky characters, humorous events (even the shootings make people laugh), and first-person intimacy suited my coming-of-age as an author. I grew up reading that style of mystery and writing books that echoed it felt right.

The Sheriff Bet Rivers series was my second outing as a crime fiction author. The first book, All We Buried, is a dark and atmospheric police procedural. This follows with my own evolution as a reader. One of my favorite subgenres in the crime fiction world are those dark, twisty police procedurals, where we see the intelligence of the investigator balanced against a kick-ass ability to fight their way out of any sticky situation.

The Bet Rivers series requires a more rigorous research process. Although I do plenty of research for Eddie’s books, an increasing reliance on law enforcement officers requires that series be more in-depth in terms of accuracy of process.

Fiction demands that events happen faster than would be true in the real world (DNA testing can take months), but the heart of actual police work needs to be upheld. Police detectives are methodical, with many protocols in place to protect evidence and ultimately support a conviction in the courts.

Luckily for me, Bet Rivers is the sheriff of a tiny mountain town in Washington State, so she’s often on her own, cut off from technology, and may not always be able to follow the rules exactly, providing me with outlets for added drama.

With the second Sheriff Bet Rivers book, A Cold, Cold World, while still a police procedural, it also has thrilleresque characteristics, with the speed of events ratcheting up the tension. I am not a thriller writer, but it was a great experience writing a book with elements from that genre. The third book in the series, Kill to Keep, comes out in the summer of 2026, and combines the feel of the first two books.

My upcoming novel, The Haunting of Emily Grace, was a whole new experience for me, as it’s suspense, with a light-horror/paranormal twist. Perfect for readers of any of those genres, the focus is on the central character and whether she’s in danger from real, imagined, or paranormal events. It was a blast to write in a new-to-me genre, one I’m a fan of as a reader, but hadn’t yet tackled as an author.

Private eye novels have a professional—but not a police officer—solve a crime, typically a murder. Police procedurals include a law enforcement officer, who has an entirely different set of rules to follow as they piece together events. Suspense, on the other hand, may not even have a crime take place. The fun of suspense is the idea that something sinister is occurring, but neither the reader nor the protagonist knows how much real danger exists or where it comes from.

Suspense allows the writer to invest heavily in the atmosphere and environment. There is research, but not, however, into how the police or a private eye would investigate, but rather about the world the protagonist lives in, where they are forced to save themselves.

For The Haunting of Emily Grace, my protagonist is a carpenter hired to finish a mansion on a remote island in the Salish Sea. Recovering from a personal tragedy, the job is a lifeline for her to get herself and her career back on track. Once strange events begin to occur around her, she keeps asking herself what lengths she will take to remain on the island and finish the job.

Each of the genres I write has aspects that I love. I’m fascinated by the procedures that the police use to solve crimes. Private Eyes, with a little more flexibility, and especially writing with a lot of humor, makes for a more uplifting and entertaining experience. Suspense brings a freeing component to the work, allowing for a much more open process as there aren’t any real-world rules to follow.

I’m currently working on Kill to Keep, and it’s great to return to the world of law enforcement and murder, but at the same time, I’m mulling over a new suspense novel, with all that wonderful freedom.

I’d love to hear about your favorite genres and what speaks to you about the books that you love.

Contact Links:
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/elenataylorauthor/
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/ElenaTaylorAuthor
Blog: https://www.themysteryofwriting.com/

Buy links:
The Haunting of Emily Grace: https://www.amazon.com/Haunting-Emily-Grace-Elena-Taylor-ebook/dp/B0F83SXK11

A Cold, Cold World: https://www.amazon.com/Cold-World-Sheriff-Rivers-mystery-ebook/dp/B0CVS93TW7/

All We Buried: https://www.amazon.com/All-We-Buried-Sheriff-Mystery-ebook/dp/B07RQH353V/

One Dead, Two to Go: https://www.amazon.com/One-Dead-Eddie-Shoes-Mysteries-ebook/dp/B0CGMRQF99/

Two Dead are Better Than One: https://www.amazon.com/Two-Heads-Are-Deader-Than/dp/1504089405/

Three Strikes, You’re Dead: https://www.amazon.com/Three-Strikes-Youre-Elena-Hartwell/dp/1504089413

 

JAMES L’ETOILE – The Waiting . . .

James L’Etoile uses his twenty-nine years behind bars as an influence in his award-winning novels, short stories, and screenplays. He is a former associate warden in a maximum-security prison, a hostage negotiator, and director of California’s state parole system. His novels have been shortlisted or awarded the Lefty, Anthony, Silver Falchion, Macavity, and the Public Safety Writers Award. River of Lies and Sins of the Father are his most recent novels. Look for Illusion of Truth coming in 2026. James also serves as the Executive Vice President of Mystery Writers of America.

The Waiting…

Who knew Tom Petty would have been a prophet when he wrote The Waiting? Because waiting is the hardest part.

If you’ve been in the traditional publishing trenches for more than a minute, you know that the industry moves at a pace that makes a snail look like Usain Bolt. It’s slow—glacially slow. There are points in the lifecycle of a novel where you can’t move forward until something happens that’s out of your control.

And that’s exactly where I find myself with Illusion of Truth, the third book in the Detective Emily Hunter series. The book is done, revised, copyedited, and typeset; each with a series of revisions and edits. Ready for release in January.
So why am I feeling so anxious? And why would the waiting be the hardest part?
Because now the hard part begins. People actually read the novel you’ve dumped blood, sweat, and tears into for months. Blurbs and reviews. Two necessary evils in the traditional publishing game. Trade reviews from the Library Journal, Publishers Weekly, Booklist, Kirkus, and leading independent reviewers help position a title for booksellers—encouraging them to take a risk on stocking your book on their store shelves.

One of the most stressful things in the business, for me anyway, is asking other authors to blurb your book. That quote or blurb gives readers a connection to the book. If they like an author who gushes about your book, maybe they’ll give it a chance. But they are so hard to ask for. Authors are busy, over-committed people who are going through their own creative hoops. I never take it for granted if an author agrees to read and blurb an upcoming book. And where I can, I try to return that positive energy back out into the universe, by blurbing others.

When you’re waiting to hear from authors you know and admire, your writer brain assembles a story about how nobody will like this one, how you’ve let your readers down, and do you even remember how to tell a story?

Then, just before you’re certain the grammar police are coming to take away your keyboard, the reviews came in and they’re better than you hoped for. Illusion of Truth earned a starred review from Kirkus, one of the toughest reviewers out there.

“Everything you read police stories for is here, and much, much more.” STARRED Review –Kirkus Reviews

Here’s the link to read the whole enchilada: https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/james-letoile/illusion-of-truth/

And then the blurbs arrived from my busy author friends, and I’m incredibly grateful to each and every one of them:

Illusion of Truth is a real deal police-eye view of the mean streets. Bosch and Ballard make room for Emily Hunter. She’s brash, bold, but with a soul and a heart for justice.
—Reed Farrel Coleman, New York Times bestselling author

An absolutely relentless thriller… in ILLUSION OF TRUTH, we find Detective Emily Hunter at her very best: Smart, sharp, and willing to do whatever it takes to solve the case of a renegade bomber. With a frightening, ripped-from-the-headlines story of attacks on her fellow police, and a cast of characters with emotional depth, perseverance, and spouting the best cop talk, L’Etoile has penned another hit in this top-notch series.”—J.T. Ellison, NYT bestselling author of LAST SEEN.

“A high-voltage, high-stakes police procedural, ILLUSION OF TRUTH is crisp and fast-paced, as cinematic as a Michael Mann thriller. On full display here is the unique storytelling sensibility that’s made James L’Etoile’s books beloved among mystery readers: a badass, rock-solid investigation plot with precinct veracity, hostage negotiation expertise, and deep empathy. The world is unfair, yes, and it might feel broken sometimes, but, as Emily Hunter reminds us: ‘We’re all broken in one way or another. It’s how we put the pieces together that counts.'”

–Margot Douaihy, bestselling author of Scorched Grace, Blessed Water, and Divine Ruin 

Was the waiting hard? Oh yeah. Was it worth it? As Tom Petty says, ‘Don’t it feel like something from a dream?’

Preorders mean a world of difference in a publisher deciding whether to continue a series. If you’d care to check out Illusion of Truth, it’s available for preorder at your favorite booksellers, Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Bookshop.org. Thanks in advance!

You can find out more at www.jamesletoile.com ` 

Or email me at  jamesletoilebooks@gmail.com

MARGARET LUCKE:  Eight Tips for Writing Great Fiction 

Margaret Lucke flings words around as an author, editor, and writing teacher in the San Francisco Bay Area. She writes tales of love, ghosts, and murder, sometimes all three in one book. The sleuth in her paranormal suspense series is Claire Scanlan, a real estate agent in Marin County, CA, who specializes in haunted houses (most recent entry: House of Desire). She also writes about San Francisco artist and private investigator Jess Randolph (latest title: Snow Angel). Margaret edited Sisters in Crime NorCal’s first anthology, Fault Lines, and has published how-to books on writing craft. She is a former president of the Northern California chapter of Mystery Writers of America.  

 Her next class for the University of California–Berkeley’s Extension program, called Writing Genre Fiction: Science Fiction, Mystery, Romance and More, will start in January 2026. Enrollment begins later this month. 

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 At a meeting of one of my writers’ groups the other day, a fellow member commented: “If you want to learn how to do something, teach it!” 

 That’s so true. I’ve been following this good advice for quite a few years now. Back into the 1990s, I lucked into an opportunity to teach a course called Mystery Writing for UC Berkeley Extension. I’ve been teaching there ever since, as well as leading workshops and programs for a wide variety of writers organizations.  

 The benefit? I’ve learned so much about the craft of writing fiction. Or crafts, plural, I should say. It turns out that students are wonderful teachers. They come to our discussions full of ideas and insights and problems and solutions, which add to my own understanding of how to create a work of fiction satisfies both its writer and its readers. My hope is that I, as well as the students, are becoming better writers as a result. 

 Currently I’m working on a book called Creating Great Characters, the first of a planned series tentatively titled Owlbert’s Wise Guides to Writing Great Fiction. Owlbert is one of the wooden and ceramic owl figures I’ve been collecting for many years. They hang out in my office and offer me insight and inspiration as I write.  

 Here are a few of the things that teaching has taught me about writing great fiction. 

 1. Great characters are the basis of great fiction. Who the story is about is more important than what the story is about. Readers crave characters they can believe in, relate to, and root for, and they’ll remember great characters long after plot details fade. This is true even of villains, the ones that readers love to hate.

 2. A great story describes a journey that changes someone. A story sends your protagonist from Point A—what her life is like as the story opens—to Point B, the place where she arrives as a result of what occurs along the way. Whether the journey is geographical, emotional, or psychological in nature, nothing afterward will be quite the same as before. This journey defines what is sometimes called the character arc.

 3. A great plot makes characters struggle with conflicts as they try to achieve their goals. What sets your character on the journey? Something happens that presents a problem, a challenge, or an opportunity. If she solves the problem, meets the challenge, or takes advantage of the opportunity, she can achieve an important goal or attain a cherished desire. But roadblocks, complications, and persons with opposing goals stand in the way. At its most basic, a story is this: A character tries to overcome obstacles to achieve a goal. Conflict lies at the heart of any great story.

 4. Great fiction provides readers with an emotional experience in a vivid story world. More than just setting, the story world is the physical, cultural, and emotional environment in which the narrative takes place. A well-told story brings the readers inside a fully realized story world and makes their experience there rich and satisfying. When readers’ emotions are engaged and they feel like they’re right there in the middle of things—that’s when they can’t put the story down.  

 5. Every great story is a suspense story. No story can succeed without suspense—the artful tension the author sets up between the readers’ hopes and fears, between their concern for the characters and their uncertainty about what lies ahead. Make your readers care, raise questions they want answers to, and make them wait to learn the answers. That way you’ll keep them turning the pages to discover how it will all turn out.

 6. Great fiction is told from a clear and distinct POV. Point of view, or POV, is the vantage point from which your readers observe and participate in the story events—whose eyes they look through, whose heart and mind they occupy, whose experience they share. The many options can be daunting—first person or third, distant or deep, multiple or single. Handling POV with confidence, care, and consistency can turn an ordinary story into a great one.

 7.  Great fiction is told with a powerful narrative voice. Voice is an elusive quality, hard to define. It comes from the way you combine ideas, language, and your singular perspectives to create a dramatic effect or elicit the desired response from the reader. Voice is what gives your story its music and personality and makes your writing sound like you.

8.  There is no great writing, there is only great rewriting. The purpose of the first draft is to discover what the story is. The purpose of the second and subsequent drafts is to figure out how to tell it as effectively as possible. Those later drafts give you the chance to fix plot issues, bring your characters more fully to life, explore your themes more deeply, and make every word count. 

 I’d like to conclude with thanks to George Cramer for the opportunity to share these thoughts with you and for the many of inspiring interviews and articles his blog has offered over the years. 

Contact Links:

Website and newsletter signup: https://margaretlucke.com/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/margaret.lucke/

Blue Sky: @margaretlucke.bsky.social

Linked In: https://www.linkedin.com/in/margaret-lucke-0934a844/

Amazon Author Page: https://tinyurl.com/MargaretLucke-AmazonAuthorPage

 

Memberships:

Mystery Writers of America: National and Northern California chapter

Sisters in Crime: National, Northern California chapter, Guppy chapter, Grand Canyon Writers

Bay Area Romance Writers

Short Mystery Fiction Society

Buy links:

House of Desire: https://tinyurl.com/lucke-house-of-desire

Snow Angel: https://tinyurl.com/SnowAngel-MargaretLucke

 

MARGARET MIZUSHIMA  -Award-Winning Author of  K-9 Mysteries/Police Procedurals

Margaret Mizushima writes the award-winning Timber Creek K-9 Mysteries. She served as a past president of the Rocky Mountain Chapter of Mystery Writers of America and was elected Writer of the Year by Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. She and her husband recently moved from Colorado, where they raised two daughters and a multitude of animals, to a home in the Pacific Northwest.

 

DYING CRY – While Deputy Mattie Walker and her family are snowshoeing in a remote area, a shattering cry pierces the air, dying slowly as it echoes off canyon walls. When further investigation reveals a suspicious death, the Timber Creek County Sheriff’s team springs into action, uncovering a trail of greed that leads to a killer who threatens Mattie’s cherished new family and tests her with the most challenging task she’s faced in her duty as a K-9 handler.

What brought you to writing? I was drawn to writing nonfiction around the turn of the century, and I began with a book about intuitive communication. I planned to weave together my experience in communication disorders, from my career as a speech pathologist, and the study of the Enneagram, an ancient Sufi personality typing system. I aimed to help facilitate team building in business companies and corporations. I finished Chapter 1 and then decided to play with writing a paranormal romance, just for the fun of it. I never went back to the nonfiction book to write Chapter 2. After completing that first terrible romance manuscript, I began attending commercial fiction writing conferences to learn the how-to’s of the writing process. It took several years and several attempts at different genres until I finally produced my first mystery. That was the book that sold, and I’ve been writing the Timber Creek K-9 Mysteries and publishing one each year since. Dying Cry is the tenth book in the series.

Tell us about your writing process. After my veterinarian husband retired, we moved to the Pacific Northwest to be closer to family. I’m lucky to have my own office in our new home. Each morning, I sit down with the goal of writing 1000 words. Sometimes I write more, sometimes less, but the primary goal is to write 5000 words per week. At this rate, I can finish, revise, and polish a manuscript in about six months. I work with my editor at publisher Crooked Lane Books to complete three edits and two proofreads, ensuring we stay on schedule to publish one book per year. So far, it’s worked out well.

If you have subplots, how do you weave them into the novel’s arc? I love subplots! Each book has a theme and a premise central to the first victim and crime scene in the mystery. My protagonists, Deputy Mattie Walker and her K-9 partner Robo, investigate the crime in this major plot. However, my other protagonist, veterinarian Cole Walker, also has work to do in solving the major crime, and his part of the story is woven into one of the subplots. Then, on top of that, Mattie usually has a personal dilemma that she’s working on, and that subplot is also woven in. It’s a lot of fun, and I believe it adds depth to the main plot. My challenge is to make all these plots fit the theme of the book, so they are somehow related. I do spend some time planning each book before I begin writing, so that I can create a cohesive mesh (not mess—LOL) by the time I’m finished.

How long did it take to write your first book, and then how long to get it published? It took about four years to write, rewrite, take months off in discouragement, revise, take more time off, re-revise, polish, and then polish again to complete my first mystery. Then, while I wrote something else, it took another four years for me to find an agent and then a publisher. I’m tech-phobic, so I decided early on that I wanted to go the traditional publishing route. I’m very grateful that I’ve been working with my original publishing team since 2014: literary agent Terrie Wolf of AKA Literary Management and acquiring editor Matthew Martz of Crooked Lane Books. After many rejections, these two professionals decided to take on a mystery series featuring a spunky deputy, her German shepherd partner, and an overworked veterinarian who is also the deputy’s love interest. I appreciate their support over the years.

Do you base your characters on real people? No, but it helped to have lived with my veterinarian husband for over four decades—I know that life—and to be able to shadow and interview my K-9 handler consultants. The stories they tell, and my observations, have definitely made their way onto the pages of my books. However, my dog character, Robo, was based entirely on a real dog. One of my consultants, a retired K-9 handler, worked with her German shepherd partner until they were both injured in a work-related incident that forced them to retire. The dog had been deafened in a warehouse explosion, but his handler kept him as her pet until he died of old age. The many stories she told me about her wonder-dog partner gave me characteristics for my fictional dog, and she also gave permission to use his name—Robo.

Margaret Mizushima can be contacted at: hello@margaretmizushima.com

Find her on Facebook/AuthorMargaretMizushima,
X @margmizu,
Instagram @margmizu,
and her website www.margaretmizushima.com.

LISA TOWLES – Author Extraordinaire of Thriller Novels

Lisa Towles is an award-winning crime novelist and an engaging speaker on writing, creativity, and marketing. With 13 crime thrillers to her name, she will soon release her latest title, Switch, in September 2025. This highly anticipated book marks the conclusion of her acclaimed E&A Investigations series, which features a female PI tackling high-impact crimes along the stunning California coast. Her previous E&A titles, Salt Island (June 2023) and Hot House (June 2022), received prestigious literary awards, including Readers’ Choice and Pencraft, and both became Amazon Kindle #1 bestsellers. A member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, and International Thriller Writers, Towles actively engages with the literary community, supporting fellow authors through her Story Impact author interview podcast. Additionally, she serves as a communications leader for tech firms in the Bay Area and holds an MBA in IT Management.

Switch Synopsis:  – A body vanished from the morgue. A coastal town gripped by bank heists. The only link is a past that someone will kill to keep buried.

In Book 3 of the E&A Investigations series, Mari Ellwyn and Derek Abernathy return to track a string of unsettling bank robberies. Their case takes a dark turn with the bizarre disappearance of a body from the local morgue, a mystery connected to the vanishing of the previous Medical Examiner, Dr. Camille Bota. Their investigation plunges them into the dangerous world of a multi-national organization involved in suspected fraud and fringe technology research. For Mari, the case ignites a personal quest, forcing her to confront the long-unresolved disappearance of her father, CIA operative Richard Ellwyn. The deeper she digs, the more Mari realizes that both she and her father are inextricably linked to their lifelong nemesis, the notorious international crime boss Jacques Martel. The missing body and the secrets surrounding Dr. Bota become entangled with her father’s shadowy past and Martel’s deadly machinations. In a high-stakes collision of family secrets and criminal enterprise, Mari must confront her father and their shared enemy before they both become casualties in Martel’s lethal game.

Book Trailer: https://youtu.be/CKXGS2CCgwY?si=1xUKskFioGLlxykd

Do you write in more than one genre? No, I’m so boring these days. I’ve written many short stories, and some have been literary, horror, scifi, but now my only genre diversity includes different flavors of thrillers—psychological, political, espionage.

Where do you write? My grownup computer (MacBook Pro) is upstairs in my “office”, and that’s the laptop I use for the business of writing – marketing, submittals, editing, newsletter, etc. But the fun computer – a newer MacBook Air, is what I use to “create”. I write all my first drafts on that computer, and then once that first draft is done and formatted, I transfer it upstairs to the grownup computer where I start the process of molding and shaping it into something people would actually want to read. The fun computer and I spend lots of time in coffeehouses, writing in my backyard, or sitting on the floor typing late at night, where it’s charging.

What is the most challenging part of your writing process? I find managing my personality during times when I feel creatively “stuck” can become its own full-time job – talking myself down, being real with myself about frustration, but agile enough to have faith and keep going. It’s hard, and most of the time I fail.

What are you currently working on? I’m just starting to format and edit a thriller I just finished writing, which will be out in August of 2026, and I’m also working hard to promote Switch, my new release scheduled for September 30th. I have seven events coming up this fall!

How long did it take you to write your first book? I think about six months. I was twenty, and I had a long habit of starting and not finishing creative projects. So, I bought a yellow legal pad and wrote by hand on it until there was no room left; then I bought another. Only one at a time. I did that until I’d used up 22 legal pads. Finishing that book might have been the first creative project I’d actually completed. It’s a book about a man who walks cross country, called Real Horizons.

It was never published (thank goodness), but it was great practice and a big turning point in my creative productivity.

We hear of strong-willed characters. Do yours behave or run wild? PI Mari Ellwyn, the protagonist of Switch, is kind of a loose canon. She’s smart, independent, takes no prisoners, and she’s got a lot of baggage that she knows she’s running from. So psychologically, she’s a very interesting specimen. She likes the idea of taking care of herself, but does a terrible job at it and pays the price. Honestly, she’s her own worst enemy, but she’s also got a lot of depth, humor, and wisdom.

What is the best book you have ever read? I could cite fifty titles right now, but The Club Dumas by Spanish author Arturo Perez-Reverte is one I adored and have reread many times. It’s like a speculative cozy thriller LOL! The movie “The Ninth Gate” with Johnny Depp and Frank Langella was based on the book (and sort of follows the story)

Do you have any advice for new writers? Yes – you don’t have to do everything at once, you don’t need to put a check in every single box, and you’re allowed to enjoy the writing process. It’s easy to get overwhelmed hearing about what everybody else is doing, but what they’re doing is irrelevant to your path, your story, and your vision. My advice is to be real with yourself about your CAPACITY, your limts, the creative energy you know you have and must carefully protect so you don’t get pulled off track.

The writing organizations I’m a part of are:

Sisters in Crime – Northern California
Mystery Writers of America – Northern California
Sisters in Crime – Coastal Cruisers

Learn more at www.lisatowles.com ↗ http://www.lisatowles.com and follow Lisa on social media: linktr.ee/authortowles

 

JANET GREGER – Transitions Take Time

J.L. (Janet) Greger was a biology professor at the University of Wisconsin-Madison. Now she is a mystery writer living in New Mexico. During the twenty-year transition, she’s written fifteen mysteries and thrillers. The Public Safety Writers Association awarded its gold medallion for best mystery to her latest novel, Crazy Like a Goat in 2025.

During this transition, she has changed little in some ways and a lot in others.

Question: Give me examples of how you have not changed. – I still read scientific journals regularly and include tidbits on science in my novels. I pick a different scientific theme for each of my novels. For example, the science tidbits in Malignancy were on cancer immunotherapy. The development of artificial meats was featured in Games for Couples. These “science themes” help me make each book unique and prevent the repetition that often occurs in many series.

I include two to four pages at the end of all my novels called the “Science Behind the Story.” These sections allow me to prove the scientific basis (with references) of events in the novel. I guess it’s a remnant of my desire to teach science.

I give my chapters titles. That’s a typical formatting tool in nonfiction books. I think it’s a way to add a little whimsy to my novels. Chapter titles are also navigation tools. I use them to tell readers if a character other than the protagonist will provide the point of view in the chapter.

Question: Give me examples of how you’ve changed. – I’m happier. I don’t have to write precise, technically correct documents with lots of documentation. I can let my characters express opinions any way they wish. I’m also retired now and get to set my own goals.

Question: What have you learned during your transition from scientist to mystery writer? = Writing fiction is not easier than writing nonfiction. Standard writing adages apply to both. These four quotes sum up what I’ve learned about writing. Please note: these quotes have been attributed to multiple authors, albeit in slightly different forms. I liked these authors’ phrasing. Maybe, they reflect my technical background and my idea of humor.

Easy reading is damn hard writing. (Nathaniel Hawthorne) The goal of all teaching—and writing is a form of teaching—is to make it easy for the student to grasp the material. Then they’ll enjoy it more and remember it longer.

You can fix anything but a blank page. (Nora Roberts) I try to write every day, even if I don’t feel like writing.

Good writing is essentially rewriting. I am positive of this. (William S. Burroughs) I spend as long rewriting and editing a book as I do writing the first draft. Thus, I write about three books in two years.

Kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler’s heart, kill your darlings. (Stephen King) I repeat this sentence to myself frequently. A beautiful sentence that doesn’t advance the plot or develop a character should be deleted. Similarly, a sentence in nonfiction that doesn’t advance your scientific argument is unnecessary.

Tell me about Crazy Like a Goat:  – In November 2024, as I was finishing The Man Who Looked for Death, I got thinking about my pet peeves. I’ve come to realize that my elderly friends (even though I am a senior) sometimes drive me crazy with their old jokes and slow driving. I particularly hate when they act crazy or forgetful to get their own way. Then I heard the Spanish phrase: loco como una cabra (crazy like a goat). This phrase especially described many senior faculty members I knew when I was a professor.

In Crazy Like A Goat, I tried to celebrate the “craziness” of spry, elderly men and women as they solved problems in a senior living center. I also tried to explore—unobtrusively, I hope—the concept that the toxic substances are not equally dangerous to everyone. While one individual survived a dose of poison in the novel, his friend died because he had other health and lifestyle problems. This complicated the police investigation and added depth to the story.

Blurb for Crazy Like a Goat – Sara Almquist and her FBI colleagues investigate the murder of a retired professor in Albuquerque. Why did someone poison his booze with methanol? Did he know too much about the management of a senior living center? Or was one of his neighbors tired of his pranks—including acting crazy like a goat?

https://www.amazon.com/Crazy-Like-Goat-Science-Traveler/dp/B0DWZWTSZ2

Tell me about your current writing project: – One of my favorite spots in New Mexico is Bosque del Apache. This wildlife refuge is a noisy but idyllic spot in December as sandhill cranes settle there for the winter. I thought it would be a perfect spot for a murder.

At the start of For Whom the Cranes Call, the body of a man wearing new red boots is found on Christmas Day. Investigators quickly learn many—family and almost everyone who worked with him at the local school—had reasons for wishing him dead. The novel should be published by early September.

I guess my transition into being an author is a continuing process. George, thanks for inviting me.

Additional information about the author: — The pet therapy dog, Bug, in my mysteries and thrillers, is based on my own Japanese Chin. I’ve also written two collections of short stories and a children’s picture book —Come Fly with Elf—based on Elf, my five-pound Papillon. For more information, check out my website https://www.jlgreger.com  or Amazon author page: amazon.com/author/www.jlgreger.com.

 

LOIS WINSTON – Book Back Cover – Help From a Pro

USA Today and Amazon bestselling and award-winning author Lois Winston writes mystery, romance, romantic suspense, chick lit, women’s fiction, children’s chapter books, and nonfiction. Kirkus Reviews dubbed her critically acclaimed Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mystery series, “North Jersey’s more mature answer to Stephanie Plum.” In addition, Lois is a former literary agent and an award-winning craft and needlework designer who often draws on her experiences in the crafts industry for both her characters and plots. Her most recent release is Seams Like the Perfect Crime, the fourteenth book in her Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mystery Series. Learn more about Lois and her books at www.loiswinston.com. Sign up for her newsletter to receive an Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mini-Mystery.

Seams Like the Perfect Crime: An Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mystery, Book 14

When staffing shortages continue to hamper the Union County homicide squad, Detective Sam Spader once again turns to his secret weapon, reluctant amateur sleuth Anastasia Pollack. How can she refuse when the murder victim is her Revolutionary War reenactor neighbor?

When Spader zeroes in on the widow as his prime suspect, Anastasia has her doubts. There are other suspects, including the victim’s lover, several reenactors who were blackmailing the widow, and others. As Anastasia narrows down the suspects, will she risk jeopardizing her own life to uncover the truth?

Craft projects included.

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Crafting Back Cover Copy

Unless a reader is searching for a specific title or author, she’ll either stroll the aisles of a bookstore or scroll through an e-tailer site in search of her next read. Either way, the book’s cover is what will first catch her eye. In a bookstore, she then picks up the book, flips it over, and reads the back cover copy. On an Internet site, she scrolls to the book’s description.

Back cover copy acts as a tease. If the tease works, the reader flips to the first page or clicks on the sample to read a few paragraphs or pages. If she likes what she reads, she’ll buy the book. If those first few paragraphs or pages don’t grab her, she continues to stroll or scroll.

Back cover copy is a hook designed to pique the interest of a potential customer. It should consist of up to four short paragraphs that describe the book’s main plot and protagonist(s).

The back cover copy should include enough information to pique the reader’s curiosity by providing an indication of the story arc and the main character(s). Who are these people? Why should a reader care about them, their world, their relationships, and their problems?

Reducing all this information to a few short paragraphs is accomplished by relying on GMC—goal, motivation, and conflict. GMC is not just for plotting a good story and creating compelling characters. It’s essential to creating every other aspect of a novel—from the query to the synopsis to the novel to the back cover copy.

Step 1: Define Your Main Character: Use one to three adjectives and a noun to define your main character. Be specific. This gives you a framework from which to work.

In my Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mystery Series, my protagonist is a “reluctant amateur sleuth.” Since mysteries are plot-driven, I created back cover copy that speaks to the cataclysmic upheaval in Anastasia’s life, which propels her into solving each mystery.

In Love, Lies and a Double Shot of Deception, Emma is described as a “poor little rich girl.” The book is a heart-wrenching romantic suspense. Therefore, the back cover copy is crafted to evoke an emotional response in the reader.

Step 2: Define Your Main Character’s Internal and External Goals, Motivations, and Conflicts: Every book must have a balance of plot and characterization. External GMC speaks to plot. Internal GMC speaks to characterization.

For each of your main characters, answer the following questions:

  1. What does your character want?
  2. Why does he/she want it?
  3. What’s keeping him/her from getting it?

Do this for both the external (the plot) and the internal (the characterization) GMC. Keep each answer to one sentence. When you’re finished, you’ll have six sentences, three that speak to plot and three that speak to characterization.

Avoid unnecessary description. No one buys a book because the heroine is a redhead. Include setting, occupation, and other specifics only if they’re pertinent to the plot and main characters.

For example, in Assault with a Deadly Glue Gun, the first book in my Anastasia Pollack Crafting Mystery Series, the back cover copy doesn’t mention that the book takes place in New Jersey because it’s not relevant. However, it does mention that Anastasia is a magazine crafts editor because Anastasia discovers the murder victim sitting in her cubicle—glue gunned to her chair. If I didn’t mention Anastasia’s occupation, the circumstances of the victim’s death wouldn’t make any sense.

In Love, Lies and a Double Shot of Deception, Emma’s occupation isn’t relevant, but I do mention that the novel takes place in Philadelphia because the city plays an important role in the story.

 Step 3: Define Other Essential Characters: Back cover copy will often mention two or three characters who are essential to the story. This varies depending on the genre and plot. Sometimes only one character is mentioned. A romance novel typically features the hero and heroine. A romantic suspense novel typically includes an antagonist. Repeat Steps 1 and 2 to define the GMC of these secondary characters. You probably won’t use all the information about these characters in crafting the back cover copy, but writing the information out will help you decide what’s important to include and what you can omit.

Step 4: Voice: Voice is the final component of back cover copy. Describe your book in a voice that matches the voice of your novel. If you haven’t incorporated the voice from your book in your answers to the GMC questions, go back and tweak the sentences.

It’s essential for the reader to be able to distinguish between your book’s genre, such as whether it’s a romantic comedy, a romantic suspense, or a cozy mystery, versus a police procedural. You want to meet reader’s expectations from the very beginning. Readers like surprise plot twists, but they don’t want to be tricked into buying a book that purports to be one genre, only to find it’s a completely different genre.

Step 5: Putting it All Together: Study the sentences you’ve created. Depending on the genre, you may or may not use all the sentences you’ve written to develop your back cover copy. Some back cover copy works well as one short paragraph. Most require two to four paragraphs. Choose the sentences that best convey your story. String them together to create your back cover copy, fleshing the paragraphs out with any other pertinent information you believe is essential to hook the reader.

Your paragraphs should be tight, concise, and free of unimportant details. Your goal is to make the reader want to flip to the first page of your book to read the opening paragraphs, then head to the cash register or click the Buy Link.

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KATHLEEN DONNELLY –  Imagination—The Power of the Unseen

Award-winning author Kathleen Donnelly is a retired K-9 handler and the creator of the National Forest K-9 and Colorado K-9 series. Her books blend suspense, heart, and four-legged heroes. When she’s not writing, Kathleen hosts the podcast Sit. Stay. Read. on Authors on the Air, celebrating books for every wag, whinny, and whisker. She lives near the Colorado foothills with her husband and their four-legged friends.

 

Fifty years ago, Universal studios released an iconic movie. Jaws hit the big screen in the summer of 1975. When I was about six years old, I flipped on the television and sat mesmerized by the opening scene. My mom realized what I was watching and changed the channel. Not wanting to deal with her daughter insisting that a Great White Shark might somehow be in a Colorado reservoir or the local pool, my Mom made sure I never saw anything beyond the first Jaws attack.

Fast forward to this summer. When I saw Jaws was released on Netflix to celebrate the anniversary, I told my husband we had to watch it. Part of the fun was that I knew from my good friend, fellow author, and retired Hollywood costumer, Marjorie McCown, that “Bruce,” the mechanical shark that played Jaws, was never tested in salt water. When Bruce arrived on set and was deployed, the salt water gummed up all the mechanical gears and Jaws went from fierce to dead in the water—just one of many troubles for a young director named Steven Spielberg. But perhaps Bruce’s failure became the film’s triumph.

As I watched the movie, it hit me that not seeing Jaws not only increased the tension, but the ripples beneath the water, floating barrels and air bubbles triggered my imagination courtesy of Bruce not working. I was also struck by the fact fifty years ago there weren’t digital enhancements. Instead, Spielberg used his ingenuity to create great shots and tension.

I love stories in all formats but after watching Jaws and having these epiphanies, I understood that using my imagination is why I prefer books. When I read, I “see” everything. Allowing the film to run in my mind and create the “movie” gives me the freedom to visualize the world, setting and characters.

Writing is much the same for me. When I outline or first start the premise of my next book, the film in my head is blurry. By the final outline, my visualizations are short snippets, not a complete movie. Once I write the first draft, the picture is clearer. Then come the edits. By the time I do the final read, I see the movie in my head. I hope that readers see their own movies in their minds with the tension similar to seeing water ripple knowing that a man-eating shark lurks beneath the surface.

And yes, I think scenes that don’t go as planned, much like poor Bruce, sometimes turn out to be what makes the story better. That is the beauty of dreaming up a story. The joy of creating. The fun of imagination. The power of the unseen.

COLORADO K-9 RESCUE Releasing September 30th:
A kidnapper’s twisted game is on. And a trusty K-9 won’t let him succeed. Years after surviving her own abduction, FBI victim specialist Mckenna Parker faces her nightmare—her kidnapper is free and hunting her again. Partnered with agent Evan Knox and her loyal K-9, Mocha, Mckenna must rescue two missing girls. But when she vanishes into the mountains, only Evan and Mocha can save her.

 

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JOHN G. BLUCK – Soldier – Journalist – Cameraman & Much More

John G. Bluck was an Army journalist at Ft. Lewis, Washington, during the Vietnam War. Following his military service, he worked as a cameraman covering crime, sports, and politics—including the Watergate scandal—for WMAL-TV (now WJLA-TV) in Washington, D.C.
Later, he served as a radio broadcast engineer at WMAL-AM/FM.

After that, John worked at NASA Lewis (now Glenn) Research Center in Cleveland, Ohio, where he produced numerous television documentaries. He transferred to NASA Ames Research Center at Moffett Field, California, where he became the Chief of Imaging Technology. He then became a NASA Ames public affairs officer.

John retired from NASA in 2008. Now residing in Livermore, California, he writes the Luke Ryder mystery-thriller series of novels at Rough Edges Press, an imprint of Wolfpack Publishing.

What brought you to writing?  During the Vietnam War, I served in the US Army as a journalist at Fort Lewis in Washington state. Writing articles for the fort’s weekly newspaper, The Ranger, was fun, and I learned to love writing. I especially liked interviewing soldiers and their families. People told me wonderful stories, and I realized how rich and varied people’s experiences are.

Following my service in the Army, I worked in television news for several years, shooting daytime crime stories in the Washington, D.C., area for the ABC affiliate TV station. I also worked at the ABC Radio Network as an engineer. These experiences yielded plenty of “story fuel” I now draw upon when writing.

After working in commercial radio and television, I had the opportunity to write nonfiction when NASA hired me to create documentary television shows. I wrote scripts used to produce numerous programs, which were translated into many languages and broadcast worldwide. Later, I became a NASA public affairs officer, writing news releases and articles.

When I retired from NASA, I finally had enough time to try my hand at writing fiction.

Tell us about your writing process. First, I write an inciting incident–an event that starts a novel. (For example, a person is murdered, a boss fires an employee, or a building blows up.) I also draft the last action-packed scene in the book. Then, I design characters and locations that will appear in the novel, and I imagine the scenes that will take place between the beginning and end of the story.

 Do you outline, or do you write without a detailed plan? I make a plan, a plot. I put twenty or thirty blank notebook sheets in a binder, and then I grab a pad of Post-it notes. I jot down a few words to describe the beginning scene on a note and stick it on the first blank notebook page in my binder. I do the same for the last scene and affix it to the previous blank sheet.

I take a good deal of time to dream up the scenes between the beginning and end of the book. I scribble a short description on a Post-it note for each scene I envision. I put these sticky notes in order between the book’s first and last scenes. I can easily move scenes around to make adjustments. Finally, I can visualize the whole story.

Then, I create a file for each scene in Scrivener, a low-cost authoring software program. (See: https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener/overview.)

I type a few words from each sticky note to label each Scrivener scene. I put the Scrivener scenes in the same order as the Post-it notes in my loose-leaf binder.

Finally, I write each scene in full from the beginning to the end of the book. I can drag and drop scenes to rearrange them because each is a separate file. I strive to entice the reader to keep reading when I write the end of each scene. I write short scenes because I believe readers are more likely to keep reading when they come to the end of each brief passage.

After my first draft is done, I use Scrivener to compile (convert) the manuscript into one Microsoft Word file. I then do my final three or four edits in Word.

Do you base your characters on any real people? I remember personality traits from persons I’ve met, which could be useful in designing characters. But I don’t use individuals I’ve known as complete models for persons who appear in my novels. Instead, I design fictional people using a process:

First, I name the major characters—the protagonist (hero), the antagonist (bad guy), and the other actors in the story. To begin to create them, I visit the Enneagram Institute website, which describes nine kinds of people (and various shades of each personality type). See: https://www.enneagraminstitute.com/type-descriptions/. Alternatively, I consult a psychology textbook to read about common types of personalities, such as the introvert, the extrovert, and many other types.

I pick out personalities that will conflict with one another. Character clashes lead to drama. I write a description of each character and critical scenes I expect to appear in the story. I refer to my character sketches and scene descriptions as I write. I also cut pictures of people from magazines and newspapers to help me visualize the fictional persons in my story.

What advice do you have for new writers? Although you might have a plot, don’t be afraid to stray from it when a character starts doing something you didn’t plan as you write. If you try to force your characters to closely follow the plot, the story may suffer. Adding scenes as you go and readjusting them can lead to good plot twists. Using Scrivener or another writing program, you can easily rearrange scenes by dragging and dropping them.

After you finish the first draft, edit it with care at least three times. Revisions result in excellent writing, and your final story will shine.

 Please describe your Luke Ryder series of novels. The Luke Ryder mystery-thriller novels are jam-packed with action. Luke is a Kentucky deputy sheriff who’s struggled with a drinking problem. He copes with his addiction by substituting adrenaline highs for alcohol when he fights crime. In Death in the Holler, the first of this six-book series, he must confront his addiction to alcohol in order to land a job as a deputy sheriff.

In the second novel, Murder at NASA, he goes undercover to investigate a cold-case murder at the space agency.

Mayhem at Sea is the third volume in the series. Luke is on an Alaskan cruise when pirates attack the ship, and he must again go undercover to confront the buccaneers.

In Book 4, Pigeons of Death, Luke works covertly, this time at a Kentucky horse farm as a stable hand, to investigate a Mexican drug cartel.  Later, Luke travels to the United Kingdom in Book 5, Headless in London. In this tale of murder, spies, and espionage, he is drawn into the investigation of the death of a baroness. Link to the Luke Ryder series: https://geni.us/WXA8

What is the latest book in the Luke Ryder mystery-thriller series? The sixth book, Assassins of Mexico, was published on July 8, 2025.

In this action-packed blend of espionage thriller and crime fiction, Luke again fights for his life…only this time, the open skies and vast landscapes of the American West become a backdrop for international conspiracy and ruthless revenge.

After surviving an assassination attempt on his driveway, Luke is dragged deeper into the covert world of international spies and drug cartel hitmen. When the FBI recruits him to shadow a Belarusian KGB defector posing as a tractor salesman on a bus tour of US national parks, Luke expects boredom. Instead, bullets fly, bodies fall, and betrayal lurks behind every panoramic vista.

Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0FB9J2797

How do our readers contact you?

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